作文的字数要求是150-200字,那么,大家尽量将字数控制在180字左右,不要写的过多,也不要写的太少。解决了字数问题,那么,漫画作文究竟该如何写作呢?
六级作文的话,我们按照三段论的方式进行写作:描述图画段、原因分析段、归纳总结段。首先,我们来看看第一段,描述图画段。具体该怎么描述呢?我们就写三句话,“先整体描述,再细节描述,最后总结”的方式进行。以下为作文模板。
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, 整体描述, which successfully captures our eyes. If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that 细节描述. Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.
在这里,同学们需要关注,怎么样整体描述,怎么样细节描述。教大家一个比较实用的方式,整体描述是“只看图,不看文字”,细节描述是“既看图又看文字”。根据漫画描述,我们可以这样写:
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, a man and a woman are talking near the desk, which successfully captures our eyes.(划线句为整体描述)If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that the man likes reading every day and his favorite book is facebook. (划线句为细节描述)Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.
细心的同学会发现,这样的描述,即整体加细节描述,把漫画的内容给描述出来了,同时,也把漫画的寓意点出来了。
第二段的写作,即原因分析段。我们一般可以从原因分析的角度进行阐述。同样的,使用模板加上自己分析的原因,第二段就可以完成写作。第二段模板如下:
The reasons for the problem are as follows. On the top of list is that 原因1. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that 原因2.
在这里,我就不写具体的原因以及参考范文了,同学们可以从一些大的方面进行写作,比如:经济原因、科技原因、文化原因、教育原因等方面去进行思考,相信难度也不是很大。
第三段的写作,总结归纳段。这一段写作比较简单,把模板背下来即可。
According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media/the awareness of the public tend to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.
第三段的划线句,大家可以根据情况适当调整,这样就能顺利完成作文了。漫画作文的写作比较简单,只需要大家熟背模板,加上自己的写的几个句子即可。只要大家花些时间,相信大家一定能取得较好的分数。